Unexpected memory of a corridor
Voices roaring down the hall
A birthday held when I was four
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Not for me, for the jolly good fellow.
An old man’s song if ever bellowed.
On a night that feels both mad and mellow.
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I mused a moment, child’s mind,
Who were his friends there by his side?
They loved him then and so did I.
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Lucky were the men back then,
To know my grandad as a friend,
Someone on which they could depend.
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I wonder if he would be proud
If he had lived to see me now.
The singing voices growing loud…
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He blew the candles on the cake
One day he lay and would not wake
Now floating down a gentle lake.
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Nothing in this world will last
Our candles burn into the past
And shadow we no longer cast.
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Unexpected memory of a corridor
Voices roaring down the hall
A birthday held at heaven’s door.
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Written by Randall Evans
So fine, so fine…..
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Reblogged this on AreMyFeetOffTheGround and commented:
This fine poem by Randall Evans…
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Wow ! Thank you so much !
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You are welcome!
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Thanks Lee, I really appreciate it 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you ! 🙂
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Very nice, particularly enjoy the structure.
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Thanks so much! I’m trying to be conscious of my own rhythm so I can write differently, but I just go back to the same old patterns haha.
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Loved it! Took me on my own life’s journey….wonderful…
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Keithstories by the way!
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Thanks so much ! Must be a good journey 🙃
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