Empty tunnels echo pain.
Beating heart and throbbing veins.
Scattered thoughts and shattered soul,
Hatred fills the empty hole.
Where to turn in this turmoil?
Mind in tempest, face in soil.
I gave too much and feel too weak,
And uttered words I never speak.
Without the mind to stay alone,
Or the want for friends I know.
I wish for comfort from above,
But hatred lives where once was love.
When we give to much we’re left in pain,
Yet, I know deep down, I’d give again…
– By Randall Evans.
Written for the Daily Prompt: Depth
Deep! 😀
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That’s the idea =P
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WOW, this is beyond fabulous…I give too much and always say “never again”…till the next time…
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Easier said than done, unfortunately..
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Yes indeed.
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I like the line “But hatred lives where once was love”. Just something about it sounds right. Like the words flow together.
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful. Just…beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your comments. They made my day 🙂
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Oh, you got it! I’m so glad to hear that–I like making people happy 🙂 Have a great day!
-Beatrice
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Excellent!!!! I really enjoy your poems. Great job.
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Thanks for all the coments, you remind me that there are readers out there 🙂
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Your writing resonates so much with mine… I feel connected
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Me too 🙂
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Man, when you try so hard and expect returns that you don’t get. This is a nice piece 😊
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Thank you 🙃
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